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    dots Submission Name: Lost :( .. but strong :) ...!!dots
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    Author: machhli
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 5/12/11
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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       This still doesn't break me.. but gives me the strength to get up again with a new force...


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    dotsLost :( .. but strong :) ...!!dots
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    Lifeless, walking through these thoughts faded memories
    A week of silence that isn’t enough still wondering but never truly lost
    I have so much to prepare for and do
    My heart and soul are broken and I cannot breathe
    I do not know what is breaking me
    I want to curl up and cuddle
    to break this chain that I am bound by
    To share this moment,
    with someone-
    who can share such sacred special moments such as these
    I won’t allow myself too though
    I want to be lost in this anguish
    To better embrace its simple poetry
    I am absorbed and in love with my own brokenness
    I want to lay in my bed and cry
    I want to weep to God
    and feel him tenderly wipe the tears away
    I want Him to kiss my face
    and tell me what is taking place inside of my soul
    Too soon all of this will pass by
    And, once the emotionally part has kindly parted,
    the understanding will still be left lacking
    for quite some time until the things which are changing are complete.
    My mind grieves for how long this will take, yet it must be done.
    On the route I shall be until then.

     Pinal Chauhan [30th Apr'15]





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      I want to weep to God

    Wow how beautiful, how your heart is on your sleeve. I say it over and over, vulnerability is beautiful. I adore the courage in this. It really struck home and touch my heart.

    Psalm 126:5
    Those who sow with tears will reap joy.
    | Posted on 2015-05-02 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Change takes time
    Sometimes more
    than we have patience to pay for.
    The present is but a murky scene
    where the conscience tiptoes
    through well lit rooms
    with shards of glass
    scattered among rose petals;
    It must make a leap of faith
    arms spread wide and pray
    to remain unscathed.
    The sunlight is waiting.


    Jan
    | Posted on 2015-05-01 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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