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    dots Submission Name: The People We Aredots

    Author: kingsley
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    dotsThe People We Aredots

    The People We Are

    We are a people of light
    A group whose presence
    Is most feared by the dark

    We are the rays of the sun
    Lighting up the world at daytime
    We are the luminous people
    Enabling clear vision at nightfall

    We are the custodians of hope
    The front-liners of positive change
    We are the people of Anambra
    Light of all nations.

    Submitted on 2015-05-02 14:08:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "We are a people of light"
    I was so close to critiquing this, but then revised it and made the realization that it was more accurate than what I was used to.
    Even made the recognition that...people have forgotten community to an extreme extent; so extreme that "the people" is rarely ever used as a phrase. I like that you reminded me of this, thank you.
    | Posted on 2015-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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