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    dots Submission Name: Etymology of Humanitydots

    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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       Look at the world around us. The inequality... It speaks. This is a WIP maybe---I haven't decided if I'll build on this. Thoughts, comments-

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    Etymology of Humanity

    Facedown---A prayer to society believing in something stronger.
    Walk away; smile and never opine---
    Listen and obey that command; it’ll be easier this time-
    In nature to appear as equal; not a savage lost in the dark.
    The years of sacrificial bleeding; trembling to uphold an ideal for all of man.
    Mincing slang and anguished thoughts despite having relevance of an angelic hark-
    Prophet or savior---blood spilt can never be weighed in wine.
    Gluttonous beasts parading around as immortal swine-
    All language knows “Not me---no longer.”
    We must live the etymology of humanity.

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      It seems to me you were feeling rather troubled/disturbed while writing this? My day wasn't all that stable, either - at least, not my mood.
    I walked into a classroom and the first thing I thought was "I can't stand humanity", due to the ignorance I'd immediately sensed in the atmosphere; the fruitless comments made on trivial aspects of other people's lives, when we know nothing.
    Completely unrelated, but the word "Ignorance" having to do with the etymology of humanity, indeed.
    Thankfully, I believe that consciousness is lifting from its sleep.

    Let us both re-live our past-lives surrounded by those who fed our knowledge rather than stripping us from our higher-being.
    | Posted on 2015-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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