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    dots Submission Name: Poltergeistdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    It is not that I do not forgive you
    There is simply some personified poltergeist of pain
    that dwells somewhere in a parallel realm or plane

    It's not that I haven't given this up to the God's up in the atmosphere
    But possibly this ghost of ours can permeate from my subconscious and haunt me here

    It isn't that I just think about it
    There is simply a place where
    There is still a gaping hole, a vortex of nightmares smashed into tiny particles that have done their very best to escape
    Some mirror somewhere has simply trapped a microscopic remnant of your face

    How can this phantom exist is a mystery
    It is a mistake
    Plagarism
    Incorrect version of history

    It would be a horror should this script ever make it into a play
    And they would be sickly souls that could act any manner of this on stage

    Day to day I am functioning consciously in a present life where I know nothing about any past or any scars or any alternate to my story
    There is simply an unwritten word or two of a tale about a girl that died before me




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      We all live with our past, our fragments, our malevolent ghosts and memories. They help shape us, and for that be thankful, but if we could only exorcise then life would be good..but then would we be doomed to a freakin repeat? thanks I'll take the fragments that occasionally catch the light from their corner with the dust bunnies.
    jan
    | Posted on 2015-05-06 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      They say you can't forget the past. No matter how you live for today there's always some remnant of yesterday that rummages through your stream of consciousness looking for a reason to surface. Lessons learned the hard way can be acutely so. Especially when we encounter similar situations in others. They come up like analogues in a spellchecker.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-05-06 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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