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    dots Submission Name: Same Routinedots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 798
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    Description:
       I was probably twenty when I wrote this, I just found this paper in like 3 pieces, taped it back up and shared it with you guys... sometimes when you travel to place in time when things were different makes you sad, but at the same time, proud for what you accomplished.


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    dotsSame Routinedots
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    I'm back with the same stamina
    Careful with the chemical,
    That exhales out of ya'
    Put yourself in my position
    All these years I've been missing,
    A great part of my listeners
    Have called it quits on me
    My whole lifestyle relates
    To that of prisoners
    Same morning routine
    With all the bitching in it,
    Seems like I sold my soul
    To the highest bidder
    I have to stay focus
    Before my life hocus pocus
    Homie pass the blunt this way
    And don't choke on this!
    Perhaps all my influences
    Were artificial,
    Superficial for the worse
    You live and you learn
    And it comes as a curse.

    ...There's more but I'm still putting the pieces together...




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