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    dots Submission Name: let it bedots
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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotslet it bedots
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    Let it be a lie
    you seek in a mischievous night
    when the closest soul is tainted
    with bloody roses
    love him
    or yourself,
    not the ideology of green grass
    on a perfect soil
    rooted to your liking
    each blade cuts you subtly
    when the wind blows hardest
    you are wary of the sun, light
    day,
    which carries away the fantasy
    of a conscious mind
    and a broken heart
    that weigh down the world
    uncharted by truth
    the lack thereof
    is taken,
    given away
    kept in a human form.




    Submitted on 2015-05-17 09:32:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There is a somewhat metaphysical realm where we meet, despite distance, untainted by the realities that make imagination untenable. A world of addictive possibilities and ephemeral sustenance. Like the entelechy of √©lan vital it portrays evolutional principles incarnate tenacities. Despite it's temporal and transient nature it is the essence of social contiguities permanence. I love the spiritualism of this piece. That we might rise above the rationalities of realism and experience the surreal integrities of intellect's compunction. The phallic actualities of our corporeally preternatural souls. Not that we can entirely discount the tenets of prophylaxis's protocols for indeed we are animal, but spirit can definitely have its integrities.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-05-17 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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