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    dots Submission Name: Tulpadots

    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254/389/301
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    With every stroke of pen and key,
    I birth something into the world.

    It is not tangible, and yet
    I can almost feel it brush against my skin,
    goose bumps forming as I shudder.

    As I read the words I write,
    I hear a voice whispering sweetly to me,
    and I am overwrought with emotion.

    Words, with them we can create
    beings of love or beings of hate,
    sharp like swords or soft as kisses.

    This power is not to be taken lightly.
    Wield the magic aright.

    Submitted on 2015-05-20 10:32:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So basically, although this pregnant of mind birthing of yours is almost purely noumenal you like to feel that it has numinous properties, and this causes some trepidation that this phenomenon not be unduly unruly. Obviously we can personify things and beings with metaphysical prowess but is this functional garb? I wonder……Often peoples writings affect me deeply but what is the actual wherewithal of this phenomenon. With age I have come to the conclusion that writing is almost totally subject to translation and interpretation. That my audience or even myself as a reader have a certain amount of impunity. Obviously if you direct a denigrating diatribe at some people it's going to have detrimental effects. Some are more easily affected than others, and some will read things into you espousals that you didn't intend. Communication is a trifold process, first there's the intended meaning of the communicator, then there's the actual words or symbolical syntax used to express said idea, and then there's the interpretation of the listener. This phenomenon is called syntactics. I guess the person that writes horror stories is guilty of trying to frighten their audience. It seems we are arguing semantics here, what does it mean to "wield the magic aright"? I am older and perhaps wiser and still I wonder!!! Psychic Golem gore.

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