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    dots Submission Name: Return to Nothingnessdots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsReturn to Nothingnessdots
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    Return to nothingness
    If you KNEW what it was to be completely naked
    You would have no hesitation in throwing off all your clothes.
    Every stitch.
    You would claw away every sliver of skin,
    Pull out every hair,
    You would burn up every ounce of fat,
    Allow your flesh to be eaten.
    Cast every bone into the fire.
    Surrender every idea
    You've ever had about yourself.
    And you would do it GRATEFULLY.
    There would be much joy and celebration
    in your return.
    You would know yourself as not this,
    not that.
    Please, please, Father,
    Consume all that I am not
    Til I am completely empty.
    Til I am nothing...
    but LOVE.





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      We all return to where we came from....ashes to ashes, dust to dust......nothing. Another good write from you.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2015-06-28 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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