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    dots Submission Name: Deeper than languagedots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDeeper than languagedots
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    I want to go deeper than language
    I want to stop wanting
    Let me go, thoughts, and leave me be
    For you are like fleas biting at me
    Jumping past my ears

    I keep leaping on your back
    Riding you to the land of fear
    And pain.
    Trying desperately to tame and rein you in.

    Hahahahahahahaha
    It is the laugh of insanity.

    Why do I persistently mount you,
    And let you decide my path?
    I should stay off you
    And be walked back to Truth.
    For you never take me there.
    I know this!
    Expecting otherwise is futile
    And yet I still do!
    I need to ignore your itching!

    I have turned a blind eye to truth
    And eaten lies
    And believed myself sick
    And I have been blinded by the face of light
    And spewed forth truths
    That have reminded me I am whole and well.

    Words are just sounds
    I have given meaning to.
    They just get in the way of YOU.
    Strip me bare
    And still my tongue
    And speak to me with YOUR silent voice.

    YOU have laid the ground
    Of the path Home.
    I need but to stay on it
    And follow it there.

    I am walking the path
    And yet I know there is nowhere to walk to.
    For I am already there.

    Walk with me Lord.




    Submitted on 2015-05-22 00:27:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I want to stop wanting

    I like how you have pinpointed the problem you are expressing.

    Words are just sounds I have given meaning to

    Another good line I enjoyed.
    This is indeed a battle.
    Its amazing how such little that we consume that is not truth can completely consume us until it seems we are sick. It makes me feel so disappointed and far from faith. I can identify with this. I really liked the style that was used to express your trials.

    Thankyou for voicing.
    | Posted on 2015-06-23 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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