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    dots Submission Name: Were you to sit heredots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWere you to sit heredots
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    Were You to sit here
    And KNOW me
    TRULY know me,
    What You think of
    As YOUR mind
    Would dissolve into Me
    And Your idea
    Of what You think I AM
    And your idea
    Of what you think you are
    Would be no more
    Would just BE
    Would be...
    just a thought floating by;
    Like a paper boat in the stream
    Of the River,
    Like a seagull, squawking and bobbing
    In the Ocean of Life.

    Remember this you and I
    We are neither the boat nor the seagull;
    Neither the River nor the Ocean,
    But in the space beyond words and ideas,
    Beyond concepts and meanings,
    We ARE One,
    Singing of our Love to each other.




    Submitted on 2015-05-22 00:29:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Some y lthinga are bigger than words.Love is such that words to describe are always small and lacking. We move it far beyond snything ordinary
    | Posted on 2015-05-22 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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