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    dots Submission Name: You have nothing I want worlddots

    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYou have nothing I want worlddots

    You have nothing I want world
    You cannot satisfy my hunger
    You cannot quench my thirst
    Your promises prove empty
    Your charms are cursed.

    You have nothing I want world
    Your love is conditional
    Your truth is all lies
    Your judgement is a henchman
    That chops and divides.

    You have nothing I want world
    Your hierarchy’s hurt me
    Your dreams are built on sand
    Your offerings are fool’s gold
    I will not take your hand.

    You have nothing I want world
    I turn away and within.

    Submitted on 2015-05-22 00:30:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Crazy. This is the world we live in.. as fleeting and judgmental as it is, we have to live here. The great thing about this life is though, we can pick and choose what is important to us... we hold the ultimate power in how our life will be lived. I don't watch the news.. that is NOT important to me. I don't subscribe to the latest trends as that doesn't work for me either. In the end, you have to be able to say that you lived your life on your own terms and no one elses. I search for people with a soul and a sense of humor..that works for me.
    | Posted on 2015-06-05 00:00:00 | by delusional | [ Reply to This ]

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