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    dots Submission Name: Poem Xdots
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    Author: ThtDizzyDreamer
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 274
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
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    I once knew a girl who was always so vigorous
    She had nothing to fear
    Her happiness seemed to be continuous
    Everything seemed so clear

    But there was this dark morbid day
    Where something inside her changed
    Where she was led astray
    And sadly became deranged

    Now this little girl was gone
    Nothing left but a beating heart
    That night where she was just a pawn
    And soon she would fall apart

    She grew up in one night, one terrible night
    Her innocence was ripped from her soul
    She didn’t comprehend so she didn’t fight
    Everything was out of her control

    A few years pass, and she’s regained her felicity
    She worked so hard to regain her innocence
    But this young girl had a mind that surpassed complexity
    And yet she was still blinded by her ignorance

    Every time it happened she couldn’t move
    She was terrified and alone
    The feeling of disgust she couldn’t remove
    And now her adolescence was unknown

    A couple more years pass and she cannot find sleep
    Afraid of what her head will force her to recall
    So every night, she continues to weep
    And a terrible weight she continues to haul

    Now this girl is the one who stands before you
    Reading this poem of her childhood
    Knowing she will pull through
    And hoping she’s not misunderstood

    We all have our demons that are inside
    And now you know the one that’s in my bed
    I will continue to wait for it to subside
    But you see, it fuels off the one that’s in my head.





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