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    dots Submission Name: The Women I Lovedots
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    Author: annadaley
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Women I Lovedots
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    My flamboyant rose flower that blossoms for days...
    when I look at you I fall into an undivided trance as your smile embraces your face...
    When I feel desolate, I take refuge in your kindness and grace, your heart is always my safest place. ..

    I am hot blooded by your spark and flair. which always causes you a steer..
    Which is why when you fall I will always be there..
    To catch and carry you with gentleness and care..

    You are the flower that beautifies the earth..you are my source of breath..
    You are everything that any man would wish to have..

    You help rectify my mind
    You purify my thoughts, for you are kind
    You are all that I see when they love is blind

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