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    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254/389/301
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 455
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    Bytes: 216

       Um...yeah, not sure what this is.

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    'C'est ca?'
    'C'est ca.'
    With such finality
    you brush me off
    like flakes of dandruff.

    At least I got a chance
    to touch your hair.

    Submitted on 2015-06-06 19:25:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ca va.
    | Posted on 2015-06-08 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
    I know what that is...
    And I give you a thumbs up young man!
    | Posted on 2015-06-07 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]

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