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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254/389/301
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 489
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 216



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       Um...yeah, not sure what this is.


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    'C'est ca?'
    'C'est ca.'
    With such finality
    you brush me off
    like flakes of dandruff.

    At least I got a chance
    to touch your hair.




    Submitted on 2015-06-06 19:25:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ca va.
    | Posted on 2015-06-08 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      HA!
    I know what that is...
    And I give you a thumbs up young man!
    | Posted on 2015-06-07 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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