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    dots Submission Name: Arborincarnationdots
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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254/389/301
    Words: 557
    Class/Type: Prose/Longing
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    dotsArborincarnationdots
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    This
    tree grows.
    Each day, new leaves
    burst forth from their buds,
    and soak up the warmth and the love
    of the
    s u n.
    B u t
    I? I
    a m
    buried amidst the roots, I am silent and soil. 'Yes, deep in the soil'. I am the nitrogen seeping into its roots, I was the carbon dioxide breathing into its leaves. I was a man, once. I read so many books, roaming the earth (and many other earths) only in my mind. So how fitting, then, this end, having sat so still for much of my humanity, that I am now feeding this tree. Becoming this tree. Becoming something alive and yet still and immovable. I think that I shall always know lives like this.

    Winter has come. Time for sleep. I will slumber, and dream of sunshot days where I will shake my branches in joy, gazing down at the one who sits in my shade, reading, yearning to be like him once more.





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      A lovely little nostalgic reminiscence. Articulately described.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-06-09 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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