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    dots Submission Name: Where did it godots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 51/165/170
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWhere did it godots
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    Time

    Where does it flow?

    Love

    Where is it now?

    I know no limits.

    I feel no fragments.

    Time

    Grounded only by the mind.

    Love

    Ignited by the flame.

    Time

    Expressed so endlessly

    Love

    Explained so carelessly .







    Submitted on 2015-06-11 02:44:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      perhaps won't let us have a careful explanation.
    perhaps in all of it's strength it consumes the mind if for a moment.
    and perhaps that is of its function.
    there are not many to love so fully,
    and hatred has it's own devices.
    love knows it needs protection.
    | Posted on 2015-06-11 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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