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Author: Lil gal
ASL Info:    32/F-ya/here
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Class/Type: Misc /Friendship
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I just wrote this, on the fly, for Depression420! I finally was able to log in again and saw he hasn't been here... Hope he logs in again! I just want to say thank you to him.


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Countless, unlike time ticking by...

Remembering the encouragement,
that always made me smile!!

Keeping the head up,
while feeling the heart slowly die...

Faking the smiles,
believing the self lies.

A person heals,
from the inside out!

Faith...in oneself,
the true belief in life!





Submitted on 2015-06-13 02:03:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  A quaint way of explaining the true meaning to life- better yet, love. Everything, even.
| Posted on 2015-06-20 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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