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    Author: Lil gal
    ASL Info:    32/F-ya/here
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 355/216/36
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
    Total Views: 493
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 408



    Description:
       I just wrote this, on the fly, for Depression420! I finally was able to log in again and saw he hasn't been here... Hope he logs in again! I just want to say thank you to him.


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    Countless, unlike time ticking by...

    Remembering the encouragement,
    that always made me smile!!

    Keeping the head up,
    while feeling the heart slowly die...

    Faking the smiles,
    believing the self lies.

    A person heals,
    from the inside out!

    Faith...in oneself,
    the true belief in life!





    Submitted on 2015-06-13 02:03:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A quaint way of explaining the true meaning to life- better yet, love. Everything, even.
    | Posted on 2015-06-20 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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