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    dots Submission Name: "Ya Te Cansaste De Vivir?"dots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dots"Ya Te Cansaste De Vivir?"dots
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    There was one time when
    I had a conversation with my mom
    and she asked me if I was tired of living.
    I said "Nah mom I'm just tired."
    She responded
    "Cause you know damn well [Suicide]
    doesn't run in the family."

    [Silence]




    Submitted on 2015-06-13 23:20:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ...La leí en español como así ya habías echo el título, jaja. Debes dejar un poco más de explicación dentro de la descripción. Francamente, no pude destacar lo que tu mamá quiso decir...ó, bueno, el punto general de la prosa.
    | Posted on 2015-06-15 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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