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    dots Submission Name: Findots
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    Author: metallichick786
    ASL Info:    26/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 78/85/51
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFindots
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    Here you are
    Menacing and hauntingly
    Here before my
    melancholy chrysalis
    Eyes like knives
    pierce the darkness
    wickedly
    rekindling
    You render me languid in epiphany
    A symphony
    Evocative yet visceral
    Nebulous




    Submitted on 2015-06-14 16:54:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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