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    dots Submission Name: Glitter Seasondots
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    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 25/68/35
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsGlitter Seasondots
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    The water inside those indigo pools, are frozen glitter
    Silver clouds filled with metallic raindrops

    The
    plink,
    plink tunes
    From metal rain freezes into a song

    Stuck between sky and earth
    Like alloy stars turning into diamonds
    Shall we freeze like stone statues fused with sparkling crystals

    Or

    be liquid sunshine bursting with a golden edge
    Melting the beauty with warmness
    Which heals and brightens a crooked smile

    That holds droplets of laughter
    Medicine for heart and soul




    Submitted on 2015-06-15 19:37:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Years, can be many things but when they move from bitterness to.joy, live can be good again.
    | Posted on 2016-02-13 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      beautiful. i say i agree with the second option.
    | Posted on 2015-07-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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