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Submission Name: Glitter Season dots

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Author:	ShadowParadox
Elite Ratio:	2.73 - 25/68/35
Words:	83

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Healing~

Glitter Season dots

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The water inside those indigo pools, are frozen glitter
Silver clouds filled with metallic raindrops

The
plink,
plink tunes
From metal rain freezes into a song

Stuck between sky and earth
Like alloy stars turning into diamonds
Shall we freeze like stone statues fused with sparkling crystals

Or

be liquid sunshine bursting with a golden edge
Melting the beauty with warmness
Which heals and brightens a crooked smile

That holds droplets of laughter
Medicine for heart and soul

Submitted on 2015-06-15 19:37:54 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
Years, can be many things but when they move from bitterness to.joy, live can be good again.
| Posted on 2016-02-13 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
beautiful. i say i agree with the second option.
| Posted on 2015-07-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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