Glitter Season

Author: ShadowParadox Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 25 /68 /35 Words: 83

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Glitter Season

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The water inside those indigo pools, are frozen glitter Silver clouds filled with metallic raindrops The plink, plink tunes From metal rain freezes into a song Stuck between sky and earth Like alloy stars turning into diamonds Shall we freeze like stone statues fused with sparkling crystals Or be liquid sunshine bursting with a golden edge Melting the beauty with warmness Which heals and brightens a crooked smile That holds droplets of laughter Medicine for heart and soul

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Years, can be many things but when they move from bitterness to.joy, live can be good again.

| Posted on 2016-02-13 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]

beautiful. i say i agree with the second option.

| Posted on 2015-07-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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