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    dots Submission Name: Warrior Alonedots
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    Author: jaycee
    ASL Info:    44/F/ Texas
    Elite Ratio:    5.27 - 2626/1259/187
    Words: 316
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsWarrior Alonedots
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    Enthroned in his chamber he sits
    A lone warrior king quietly protecting.
    Staring at a black screen, but
    Seeing the face burned into retina and heart.
    As his throat traps a roar.

    Frustration rises as his need for her rises,
    His woman, thousands of miles away,
    For safety, as duty calls.
    A consort taking backseat, She
    Stands the casualty and cost of war.

    And he closes his eyes to see her face,
    to smell her perfume and imagine a taste;
    Her winsome smile is his pathway to grace
    A touch of her hand makes his whole body quake
    He holds only her picture to ease the ache.

    His heart sits heavy, feeling failure
    Their video call revealed huge cracks:
    Fissures in his role, as to have and to keep,
    She is not healthy or whole,
    And he is left helpless in this hostile land.

    He does what he can to cheer her,
    His Queen of Hearts so dear,
    But he longs to take his place
    At her side to comfort and make well
    And hold her once more.

    And he closes his eyes to see her face,
    to smell her perfume and imagine a taste;
    Her winsome smile is his pathway to grace
    A touch of her hand makes his whole body quake
    He holds only her picture to ease the ache.

    He turns back to his screen, deeply sighing,
    Knowing a broken warrior's good to no one,
    But with her on his mind
    He has only one desire--
    To sit and watch her videos meant for him, alone.

    And he closes his eyes to see her face,
    to smell her perfume and imagine a taste;
    Her winsome smile is his pathway to grace
    A touch of her hand makes his whole body quake
    Only her image and his hand to ease the ache.




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      She stands the casualty and cost of war

    Oh the passion, amazing....just brilliant. I love this piece I really do not know what to say it was simply captivating.

    Thank you oh so much for sharing. What a lovely read.
    | Posted on 2015-07-03 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      j there's a lot of your effort in this one: it's not just a pom is it(?).

    you knew it was clumsy when you wrote it, which isn't a bad thing and you knew its clumsiness made the writer's standpoint both visible - and universal (both appraisable and brave at the same time).

    sweetie i'm going to have to come back to this in due course because it's in need of a good coat of looking at.

    and i will.

    yours,

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    | Posted on 2015-06-26 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]


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