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    dots Submission Name: Rising waters dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRising waters dots
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    I woke up today and submerged myself
    In thoughts so negative I purged.

    Decided I needed to be in the water
    I took a shower only to plunder.

    Lying down, the water fell upon me
    Until I could only hear the thoughts
    Of the flood pouring out of me.

    My ears were filled with the rumbling of droplets so fierce
    Until the water filled my ears.

    Engulfed in the fluidity of no gravity
    Mentally yearning for centrally located reality.

    Pestering thoughts are still unrest
    I lay still at best
    Hoping to release thoughts from my chest
    Of thumping hearts distressed.

    Water rises
    So I let it rise.
    Up to my eyes.

    And wouldn't you know it my tears blended
    Morphing effortlessly into its surrounding.
    With no detection no witnesses to see
    No trace at all , poor me.

    Dangerous thoughts that lead
    Drowning beneath the sea of me.

    Falling lower and lower submerging completely
    I thought for a moment I could breathe.

    Only to realize I'm not Whitney.
    We all need a release
    But the tub is not place to be napping.











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      I use to do this myself. There is something about submerging yourself in a bath as water from the shower comes down on you that dulls the senses. The drama behind the steadily rising water just pushes away emotions that seemed to have been drowning you. I think you captured that very well.
    | Posted on 2015-07-05 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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