Description: I wrote this a couple years ago and I'm not really sure how I feel about it. If you like it let me know. If you think it needs work let me know. If you think it doesn't make any sense at all and is complete gibberish, please, feel free to let me know.
You know Adam was present during that fall? He was right there with her or so it would seem the way it reads in scripture. Eve gets so much put on her for this but Adam and Eve were a united pair. It seems there are many versions to that story. I like yours as well. The style in which you told it was unique.
She went to the tree
I love the drama in those words hanging in the air as all of humanity hangs in those actions.