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    dots Submission Name: Ink Memorydots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsInk Memorydots
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    I like to use a pen so my mistakes are not forgotten.
    I like to fill page after page and watch
    As the ink dries like the blood in my feet, coagulating.
    Because I've been standing
    Still in the quiet
    Apathy whitewashing the ache
    of my dreams
    Unfulfilled.

    This life is a story
    not yet written in full
    And though we all in time must write our lines
    from start to finish
    There are those among us
    who would erase all the moments
    that should have rhymed
    but didn't
    out of fear that in our eyes
    their lives would be
    diminished.

    But I've been standing still in the quiet
    Contemplating old days and soft riots
    And I could not erase a single moment in memory.

    Some days I like to shake my feet and run
    And think about the ageless nature of our gods and our sun.

    I like to use a pen so these moments are not forgotten.
    I like to fill page after page within my mind.




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