Kerri's Song by Mithrandir

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Author:	Mithrandir
ASL Info:	28/m/N.Y.
Elite Ratio:	4.62 - 452/681/113
Words:	218

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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This was written in tribute to a friend who left this world behind too soon. These are actually lyrics to a song from my old band.

Kerri's Song dots

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Goodnight sweetheart
I pray you sleep well
Our time together
Down the road was too short

I can't pretend my hearts
Not broken
But eventually it will mend
But this pain will linger on

Now you're lost from
The body but
Never from my mind

Darling girl
The minutes become days
The days become years
Yet my love for you
Remains strong

The way you
Said my name
Is the ghost I sleep with

Goodnight sweetheart
The pain is gone
But i can still see the
Grace i found in
Those delicate eyes

I can't pretend
I'm not broken
And this loss
Makes my hands shake

You're lost from
The body
But never from
My heart

Darling girl
The days become years
The years become my lifetime
And I'll carry you always

The way you
Said my name
The grace i found
In your eyes

The way you
Said my name
The grace i found
In your eyes

And when I'm layed
To rest
And when im layed to rest
I pray we meet again
I pray we meet again
Just to see you smile

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