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    dots Submission Name: Kerri's Songdots

    Author: Mithrandir
    ASL Info:    28/m/N.Y.
    Elite Ratio:    4.62 - 452/681/113
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       This was written in tribute to a friend who left this world behind too soon. These are actually lyrics to a song from my old band.

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    dotsKerri's Songdots

    Goodnight sweetheart
    I pray you sleep well
    Our time together
    Down the road was too short

    I can't pretend my hearts
    Not broken
    But eventually it will mend
    But this pain will linger on

    Now you're lost from
    The body but
    Never from my mind

    Darling girl
    The minutes become days
    The days become years
    Yet my love for you
    Remains strong

    The way you
    Said my name
    Is the ghost I sleep with

    Goodnight sweetheart
    The pain is gone
    But i can still see the
    Grace i found in
    Those delicate eyes

    I can't pretend
    I'm not broken
    And this loss
    Makes my hands shake

    You're lost from
    The body
    But never from
    My heart

    Darling girl
    The days become years
    The years become my lifetime
    And I'll carry you always

    The way you
    Said my name
    The grace i found
    In your eyes

    The way you
    Said my name
    The grace i found
    In your eyes

    And when I'm layed
    To rest
    And when im layed to rest
    I pray we meet again
    I pray we meet again
    Just to see you smile

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