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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    dotsSigned Outdots
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    Brown spots behind my eye-lids
    ideas smudged just like alcohol stains and i'm no longer aware of my surroundings.

    What to do with myself; an undetermined brink of the unknown
    standing over a blank panflit that would have never been
    never has and never will be filled.

    Words that spill these substances I drill into the specks that are these crevices of my thin skin, my pores
    where my history lies, ready to take on anew
    Shedding...
    I wish I could.

    And these wishes, longings
    how never to be forgotten
    when one craves the endless fullfillment that is to love and to cherish oneself.




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