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    dots Submission Name: Transcendencedots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1092/410/117
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Sailing the mystic omnipresent seas,
    on a craft made of dragonfly's wings.
    Tacking across the magical breeze,
    caused by songs that the sirens sing.

    Weathered and worn by infinite tides,
    holding lines made of eternal foible.
    The warrior's blade like a rudder she rides,
    in a sheath made of filigreed sable.

    Virulent flow of futurity's pandemic,
    vibrant waters fertile subtle surreal.
    Ephemeral beings translucent endemic,
    purveys omnipresent augur's appeal.

    The starlit sky imbues waterfall's mist,
    myriad creatures seek eternity's mantra.
    Vivid delineation of artistry's gist,
    seeking virile omnipotent yantra.

    Celestial heights where eagles traverse,
    soaring and gliding we learn to fly.
    Must life be terminal we say of terse,
    whilst composing music to make angels sigh.




    Submitted on 2015-06-28 21:15:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This just reads really erotic. I don't know. Here's my comment.
    | Posted on 2015-06-30 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh yeah... I got there. I may not be composing music but I do sigh a lot.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2015-06-30 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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