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Short-lived


Author: OneDarkFlame92
ASL Info:    23/m/Numeanor
Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 461 /425 /227
Words: 54
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Short-lived


We awake just the same,
every morning, every day
in our wake is how we stray,
our talk, our walk, and things we say

Sketched along this bleeding wall
the universes' cursed flaw
shout your legacy,
shout it to us all
for a chance to be writing in a bathroom stall




Submitted on 2015-06-29 16:07:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I'm in high school and needless to say, this struck a nerve.
In a good way, that is.
| Posted on 2015-08-17 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice. Sometimes it feels like we're definitely writing to ourselves, but if we have a bathroom wall such as this one to document things... perhaps there's an audience that will come along some day.

Liken to the cave man's painting on his own cave walls...someone today is amazed, at long last. How long did that those creative efforts await discovery hidden in the dark? Thousands of years? And yet, the artist is vindicated.

Legacy revealed.

| Posted on 2015-06-30 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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