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    dots Submission Name: Ispired by Philippians 2:13-14dots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsIspired by Philippians 2:13-14dots
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    The early morning breathes on my skin
    Cool air against my being,
    my heart, racing
    Every moment undoes a series of locks and chains

    Bound up for years by my own oppression
    Shackles tightly coupled with every desire to cut into my wrist's

    Yet
    Like the dove freedom has descended

    No more do I receive the temptation to sink into myself and my many vices
    No more do I hide from the face of the one who let me see
    No more do i hide from hiding

    I am unfinished
    Yet He has spoken
    I search for another glimpse into His will
    Principle becomes a melody I can dance to
    Praise becomes the song on my lips




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      "I am unfinished
    Yet He has spoken
    I search for another glimpse into His will
    Principle becomes a melody I can dance to
    Praise becomes the song on my lips"

    And long may it be so!

    We are always changing and growing
    It's part of the seeds He is sowing!
    Rejoice in His love and peace!

    I am happy that you are to this place of joy and contentment in your life. This is a lovely write. continue in His ways, and He will send many blessings.
    | Posted on 2015-07-06 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      "No more do I receive the temptation to sink into myself and my many vices
    No more do I hide from the face of the one who let me see
    No more do i hide from hiding"


    I grow, evolve, and slither like a whisper
    curled into a ball of sunbathed feline dreams
    embrace the morning like the soul of heaven
    everything that is and was, will be...

    Just some thoughts on yours.

    | Posted on 2015-06-30 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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