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January 23rd


Author: Thenocturnal
ASL Info:    24 / Male / Darkness
Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 4 /4 /4
Words: 203
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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January 23rd



I know you never loved me
I know it doesn’t make any sense
Still, some whisper in the air
For you, only for you my love

Remember when we were young
Remember January 23rd
We were chasing butterflies beneath the deep blue-sky
Suddenly, you were crying
Cos I have messed up everything
Oh I have messed up it all...

And if you are listening this song
Now you know I loved you the most
Like a tear drop in the flower
Like a shadow on the river

But, I know you never loved me
And it’s the worst thing I’ve ever had
Felled like falling apart all the time

Remember when we were young
Remember January 23rd
You were looking like a blue bird flying in the air
Suddenly, you were crying
Cos all the flowers were gone
And I have picked up them all
Oh I have picked up them all..

And if you are listening this song
Now you know I am already gone
Cos love is like a myth and which I never had
And I wanted you to have all the flowers
Still you can find those where I am sleeping alone… alone...




Submitted on 2015-06-30 11:11:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Well I think hearing the melody and the vocals to this would really transform it.
| Posted on 2015-07-07 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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