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    dots Submission Name: Resurrecting the Tower of Babeldots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1082/406/116
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Leeward lecher leer lingam. Yogi yowl yoni yore. Straight up forever ontology on high. Pandemically phatic futurity fatidic's raucously riotous. The angel was a visage of resplendent beauty as it hovered in mid air above the knoll. Deontological probity.
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    dotsResurrecting the Tower of Babeldots
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    Edifice erections surreal mistic heights
    Wayward excursions and catenary's bight
    Communal collusions of harmonies site
    Ethereal subsistence on exsertion's light
    Lingam and yoni are indefatigably tight
    Exponential overload was communities plight

    Semantic regalia is myriad temptation
    Finite being a mutual oblation
    Vicarious recalcitrance an obeisant sensation
    Conception's vastness like incalculable equation
    Ephemeral effulgence is indomitable pervasion
    Treacherous traverse and eternal occasion

    Succinct salience is symbiotic allegory
    Fecundity's verve a transcendent promontory
    Imperative ascension the conjunctive's divinatory
    Audacity's exigence and fertility's invocatory
    Erotica's erectile like mentality's trajectory
    Futurity's fatidic and inherent delusory

    Damn it fell right over like categorical imperative's contradictory!




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    | Posted on 2015-07-21 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      You are a true poet. I am always reminded and humbled by your work. The layers here are just brilliant. It is like a puzzle, to begin to piece together the meaning of your words and what an awesome picture we have when things start to clarify.

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