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    dots Submission Name: Submissiondots

    Author: DearlyDeparted
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    i am a submissive woman.
    i find pleasure, joy, and fulfilment in being submissive to a dominant in a loving relationship.
    i am not stupid or weak-
    i am a strong woman, with firm views and a clear concept of what i want from my life.
    i do not serve out of shame or weakness, but out of pride and strength.
    i look to my man for guidance and protection, for never am i more free than when He dominates me.
    i know He will protect my heart, mind, body, and soul with his strength and wisdom.
    He is everything to me, as i am everything to Him.
    His touch awakens me, and his thoughts free me.

    If he desires my body for pleasure, i shall joyfully give it to Him, and take pleasure myself from knowing i have brought Him happiness.
    However, the pleasure of the flesh is but one facet of our relationship.
    The love, trust, and free exchange of words and thoughts, both spoken and unspoken, those are more important parts of our relationship'
    i spend my days knowing the energy and thought He puts into our relationship is as much for my benefit as it is for His.

    My body is His, and if He says i am beautiful, i am.
    No matter what others may think of me, i am beautiful in his eyes, and because of that, i can walk with my head held high, for who can tell me my man is wrong for seeing the beauty in me?
    If He says i am His toy, His slut, His tramp, His dirty little whore, then i will be as wanton and as dirty as He wants me to be.
    Likewise, if He needs me to be His comfort, His confidant, His nurse, His best friend, then i will fill those roles with honor.
    When others do not understand us, i laugh at their blindness, and pray one day they will have what we do.

    My mind is his to explore and expand as only He can.
    i have no secrets from Him, for secrets are a thing that would keep me from being completely and perfectly His.
    Secrets would be a wall between my love and myself, and the only walls i want are the ones that keep us sheltered together, not ones that will tear us apart.

    my soul is His, as bare to His touch as my skin under his finger tips.
    Never a moment goes by when i do not feel His presence, be he miles away, or standing over me.
    If i were ever to displease Him, His displeasure would be like a blow to my soul, the worst punishment of all.

    i am a submissive woman
    i am proud to call myself that.
    My submission is a gift i do not give lightly, and can only be given to One who can truly appreciate my gift.
    Only to He who has that strength could i have given myself so fully.
    I am strong and proud.
    Because of His dominance.

    Submitted on 2015-07-01 20:40:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There a lot of qualities here that are just the basis of a great and long lasting relationship. Being of one mind without secrets is at the root of it. People often think I defer to my husband, what they do not see is all the discussions we have. I think most women in truly committed relationships are submissive on some level. But men yield all the time, it's just in a different way. When you own each others hearts, you both give. I'm sure he strives to make you happy, just as you do for him. Disappointing our spouse, makes both mine and my husband's list of things we fear, or shy away from in our marriage. It's one of the things that has kept us together for 21 yrs; we think of the other's reaction before we act.
    As long as you are both happy, live life in the way that is right for the two of you.
    | Posted on 2015-07-06 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      I think it is amazing that you are able to trust someone with this level of submission and I can relate to it. I think it is even quite appropriate to be of this mind, as you said, when you serve out of strength and love, when you can trust someone with that it is a beautiful thing.
    | Posted on 2015-07-05 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]

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