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    Author: Raphael
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    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    To fawn at the skirts of great masters,
    A notebook by my side under the table,

    Their crumbs are genus and swords
    Of melody I will skew across

    Our best clothes, our skinny jeans;
    A potion of old blood in bloom.

    In me are all their rivers convelescing
    Though I smile as if the thing were nothing.









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      First two lines is content, the last 6 are empty and pointless.
    | Posted on 2015-09-04 00:00:00 | by HisNameIsNoMore | [ Reply to This ]
      It's as though you've described exactly what I've been doing as of late.
    I've recently moved into a new town, where I have two libraries and ample time to spend on reading. I decided to keep a journal, just to fill with quotes. I've read 5 books in the past 3 days - as I have not had this opportunity for years.
    And not to mention, I have smiled more often due to this as well.
    | Posted on 2015-08-21 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a pretty great observation brought modern day with your references. It is hard to exist in the shadows of greatness, hard to define our own voice.
    | Posted on 2015-07-06 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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