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    dots Submission Name: Dear Musedots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsDear Musedots
    -------------------------------------------


    So i’ve always dreamed
    so i’ve always seen

    my muse

    Im left with the feeling
    that there is
    no time for loneliness

    I often wonder
    why am I this weak?

    ——*——

    my muse

    you fell

    ——*——

    my muse

    It’s not that I want to keep you to myself
    I only want to be needed by you
    as selfish as that may be

    ——*——

    my muse

    I thought you would never talk to me again
    but I am glad you came to see me tonight

    although

    if you knew the real me you’d be disappointed

    I only want to remember
    those fantasies that escaped when we tried
    to make them a reality

    I don’t know if we really did
    try

    i’m struggling to feel comprise
    in the loneliness where I only exist

    but my muse

    I keep telling myself
    that’s the nature of it

    I keep telling myself
    that loving you wasn’t a waste

    ——*——

    my muse

    I keep telling myself
    I still cherish the moments we caught
    each other in our egos

    ——*——

    my muse

    I see how I often steer myself
    in the direction of your story..

    just so that I can keep appearing in it

    ——*——

    my muse

    It took me a while
    but now I know

    that my story

    is just apart
    of your falling

    before my time is up





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    ||| Comments |||
      We are all selfish till our cup is emptied, and so we become less of ourselves, and more of others.
    | Posted on 2015-08-18 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm. sad. I've been there, will probably be there again. Inspiration. It's dual edged sword, that can work as a shield.
    | Posted on 2015-07-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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