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    dots Submission Name: Distancedots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDistancedots
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    Known, but ignored
    to just us two,
    a passion
    distance must be ignorant of

    an intimacy,
    not mere physical connection;
    unable to be washed in absence,
    and forgetful of presence

    that has surpassed
    expectations of love
    and fulfillment
    enjoyed in unrestrained exuberance

    regardless of tactile yearning
    and defiant of sensory desire;
    separation,
    bridged by one desire




    Submitted on 2015-07-04 14:29:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Indifferent, detached...both relatable vibrations, to say the least. You make it easy to put oneself in the writer's shoes, no matter how personal the story-line may be.
    Felt like a drastic attempt at cutting oneself off from what any human being may truly desire; love.
    All-in-all, it's still a selfish nature we've all got.
    | Posted on 2015-08-17 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      So nicely written.
    | Posted on 2015-07-06 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]


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