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    dots Submission Name: Walkdots

    Author: Solomon Disease
    ASL Info:    101, male, earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 284/292/104
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 443
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    Sometimes we have to grow up
    Leave all the silly childish beliefs behind
    Spears, and caves, and animal flesh
    Camels, nomads, horses, buggies
    Planes, Trains and automobiles
    The future is for the dreamers

    Those who can dream like no child ever could
    Those who can imagine like no one ever has
    Whose beliefs are that in their humanity
    And in yours

    We are not born of evil
    We are the magic of the universe
    Of Evolution
    We are

    And we shall be great
    When we can see each other as humans
    Not as labels

    As human
    And we learn to walk on our own

    Submitted on 2015-07-09 14:24:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a great social commentary to a world that would rather label and condem, that deal and appeal to the positive traits found. We have labels that hinder progress and the openness to free thought which is the catalyst to progress. Indeed we have regressed to a crawl, or a walker at the very least. The world would be a lovely place if our evolution was allowed to run free.
    | Posted on 2015-07-16 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      Neanderthal 's commanding..
    Exploring the universe in dreams
    Amidst a spaceship..

    I really like this piece
    | Posted on 2015-07-12 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]
      Sometimes we have to grow up


    Leave all the silly childish beliefs behind

    Hmmmm such as?

    Spears and caves and animal flesh


    Camels nomads horses and buggies

    Nooooo! Nevaaah!

    I can agree with everything else, and well said.
    However I believe it is a true value to keep a childlike mind and heart.
    | Posted on 2015-07-09 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]

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