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    dots Submission Name: Leavingdots
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    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
    Total Views: 718
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    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLeavingdots
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    Hiya friends. It's been wonderful getting to know everyone and get my work out there for you all to review and give me helpful feedback on. Unfortunately, I'm leaving this site and removing all posts that have any of my novels within them. My poetry will stay up for now as I don't plan on publishing them any time soon, but my novels I do hope to get published sooner rather than later. If you would like to keep in touch you can find me on writer's cafe at:

    http://www.writerscafe.org/riverrei

    Facebook:

    https://www.facebook.com/RiverReiHayden
    https://www.facebook.com/becomingasurvivor

    Twitter:

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    Instagram:

    https://instagram.com/riverrei/


    I'll miss you all, but I have way too many sites going right now for working full-time, part time at fiverr.com (https://www.fiverr.com/riverrei), and trying to keep up with my writing. Thanks for everything though! I hope that you follow me and keep in contact :)

    MUCH LOVE!!! <3




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