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    dots Submission Name: Salacious Mesmerism's Endemic Impromptudots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1092/410/117
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    dotsSalacious Mesmerism's Endemic Impromptudots
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    He’s trick, like enrapturing
    Wherein lies the paradox of his pantheism parapet’s paragon
    Extraversion embezzlements and euthanasia extortions
    Embark embargo extraditions
    Diction’s enunciation echoes of opaque opulence
    Its redolence a savory waft
    The evolution of psychic clarity’s id conclusions
    Bizarre dichotomous augur the singer’s aural austerity
    Gypsy Queen, his guitar’s moniker, romanced aimed intention
    Elaborate elliptical empathy endeavors for posterity’s predication
    Pandemically phatic propriety venerations
    Their apex crux axis beyond finite solution
    Carousel ceaselessly ceremony chaos character charisma
    Cerebral cortex’s climax matrix's vertex vortex
    The individual must remain sacrosanct
    Traipsing through the fallow furrows of assimilation’s synthetic synthesis
    Like capillaries' capricious and intravenous intrepid
    Incalculably sensual beyond emotion’s expression
    Impetus intrigue's intuitional verve
    Ethology’s entelechy, theosophy’s theophany
    Zoomorphic zoolatry's social contiguities
    Futurity's corporeally preternatural fatidic
    Elan-vital's apotropaic apotheosis





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      " beyond finite solution" - I like that...

    Smooth, like that second swallow of your favorite spirits after you fully appreciate that the first "kicked your ass" (and you knew it would).

    What becomes addictive, anyway? Looking back, is it so hard to define such madness as rather a more full awareness? How deep is the rabbit hole?

    Amity is honest enough.

    I once was vain enough to think I might could teach something ineffable when apparently I didn't appreciate the meaning of the word. Things are much easier now.

    I like it, I'll have another!


    | Posted on 2017-07-22 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Prima facia towards certain method in madness or certain madness in method? What is it like to dance with a god, anyway? Your humble servant, M'Lord.
    | Posted on 2017-07-21 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      There are so many words here for so many different theories. Here is what is extraordinary to me, the way you are able to connect one to another in a sassy out of the box observation, and my favorite part, the consistent use of alliteration. You are a mastermind for this unique style. Building puzzles with words. Your own art form I never get tired of looking at.
    | Posted on 2015-07-25 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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