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    dots Submission Name: Orangesdots

    Author: trinityfinger
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 136/343/209
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Life in rewind a few months previous. Reconnection is almost tragic in how beautiful and fleeting it all is.

    Orange is her favourite colour.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    In that way a cold sun warms up past
    ten a.m., natural and soothing in melody
    and affection,

    wild freedom in her eyes and a heart
    exploding with laughter, divine and
    persistent in memory.

    To another city I go, aching for what ifs, a
    connection which intuition tells me is as real
    as I've felt in thirteen hopeless years.

    Extraordinary should never be let go, yet
    here I am embracing loss in her perfection.

    Submitted on 2015-07-24 08:21:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think it's best to remember that we will always place past love on a pedestal to try and give ourselves comfortable nostalgia in the situation, but remember that you both moved forward for a reason, and that reason was to move forward and full find yourselves before trying to connect with the emotion called "love". Your writing style is very passionate and I love how much I see when I read so keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2015-08-04 00:00:00 | by Zanitystar | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah i feel this one. hmmm good luck man. got a number? maybe dial it up? that's all i got to say. excellent writing skills.
    | Posted on 2015-07-24 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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