This sorta strung from one topic to another, so I couldn't really follow. But that could be just me.
Besides the fact that I do tend to be slow, I liked that no matter how lost I was, I still followed your trail of thought.
I like that you don't detach yourself from the reader - a fault of my own.
I was taught that if you want people to stick around; you should never talk of politics, sex, or religion. This poem feels as though it touches on this principle a little bit. But, from beginning to end I really love this piece. Simple, truthful, wise and heartfelt.
Submission Name: Antiquated
