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    dots Submission Name: Journey dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 51/165/170
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsJourney dots
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    Journey through knowing
    that all we have to do,is be the light
    share the light and take it easy.

    Pleasing others is not the business we should be in.
    Living freely, beautifully , and wanderlust.

    Congregating together
    Like flocks of a feather
    to discover the true colors of each other.

    Love and live
    Be and give
    The light inside our hearts
    That forgive.

    Continue to know
    That as we grow
    Our eyes will see
    And begin to believe.

    Our ears will hear
    The love that stands near,
    while the mind sits back and wants
    It's snack.

    Entertaining notions of
    motions from propulsion
    Soaring high above the oceans.

    Love me so hard you can't understand .
    Kiss me so hard you can't deny
    That palpitation in your heart.










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