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    dots Submission Name: Contradicted Me || part 24dots

    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsContradicted Me || part 24dots

    My contacts list never reaches 10
    Each move another bidding they be erased
    Just as anyone and everyone
    from my life

    These thoughts identify,
    not only that, but manifest
    And I create this world around me
    Where it is what it is
    and nothing can be done about that.

    Where my control is over what is said and done
    Sans social company taken by another one

    And I sustain a perpetual loneliness that I and only I allow myself submission unto.

    Crept between the thighs of another woman
    Battered and dismantled
    Her initial predecessor standing in the hallway
    Smug and unguarded
    Am I simply giving a try
    to designate what has been forgotten?

    Submitted on 2015-08-02 21:23:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The life of an introvert. As I see it one of the hardest things to do in this life is make that final decision to truly be a part of yourself, no matter the consequences. A good quote I found to describe this situation.

    "Well it's hard to find a reason, when all you have is doubts
    Hard to see inside yourself when can't see your way out"


    I know he's a little mainstream but the quote is from a song of his called "Whispers" and I find it reflects introverts so well in 2 lines. Anyway, in terms of writing style, you could stand to use a little imagery, the style you are writing in seems vague or distant, I don't know if that was intentional or not though! Have a great one.
    | Posted on 2015-08-04 00:00:00 | by Zanitystar | [ Reply to This ]

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