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    dots Submission Name: Unloveddots
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    Author: metallichick786
    ASL Info:    32/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 78/85/52
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I've lived quietly inside, a celestial vortex
    Peering through the veil, layered in lies
    And I've done what I can do, in a paradigm of condemnation
    I'm washing my hands of you
    Beneath the swollen eyes, tears rising to the surface
    blanketed in fears...thoughts... I'm worthless

    You cannot hollow out the hole, of what remains of this heart
    I've sought what isn't real, in a "perfect" person
    You were all that I could feel, yet still I'm numb
    Even through the hatred, my heart it suffers for you
    The hallowed silent horrors, vexing my mind
    Revealed all the secrets, you left to find

    Unpunished you sail, through a freedom I'll never know
    I wish you were a dream, I could wake up from
    Pretend it wasn't real, then I'd be done
    But the words replay inside my head, as I pace the earth alone
    Treasuring the darkness, of what's left inside of me
    I am so complacent with this insanity
    Forever are the vows, of a liars song unheard.




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      This quite simply reads like manic depression. I mean no insult, I just suggest you seek counsel. It's a very powerful piece, it just seems to straight from the heart to talk about style. But heart is good, maybe find that flutter, write with that? Write down hopeful gestures, or take pictures of smiling cats. You know therapy can be free, it's a matter of finding a hobby that makes you happy. Maybe getting it out is writing it down, driving to a field where no ones around, looking up to the sky and screaming it aloud for the sky never falls when the rains not allowed.
    | Posted on 2015-09-16 00:00:00 | by Ra | [ Reply to This ]


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