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    dots Submission Name: under the protection of the sundots

    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 204/205/140
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       one of my first recollections of my youth
    and my last recollections before my sleep...

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    dotsunder the protection of the sundots

    earliest recollection; hop-scotch, innocence

    radiant sun; egotistical childlike rational

    hopped the numbers; hop, skip and a jump

    my first Father, the planet, star the Sun

    up in Waterloo, Los Angeles; thought he followed right behind

    without the knowledge of gravity and solar systems

    safety in the warmth on my skin

    carefree so far yet closer to sin

    all the future unknown

    before the world

    in dawn

    still standing in a yellow dress crotchet

    curly, wonderous, wig borrowed from the attic's den

    now a wild driver

    escaping death by narrow whim

    still the daughter of the reddest, star

    that we wish upon

    and, the Fiat doesn't slam against any hell

    under the protection of the sun

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      This is beautiful. A gem. Kind of a little bit of a ride, but that finish. Tying it all together like that. That was very calming, therapeutic. Thank you very much for sharing.
    | Posted on 2015-08-10 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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