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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Alaudidae
    sways
    on the tip
    of a tree

    its greens.

    Its golds


         d
         e
         n
         u
         d
         e
         d





    A love
    A lark



                                   if


                                                                                     I'd have said it all.




    Submitted on 2015-08-06 06:23:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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