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    dots Submission Name: Unexplained dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 308
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsUnexplained dots
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    Words


    written to form concepts.


    Concepts never fully expressed do to lack of



    Language.




    Language simply not enough to express
    Emotion.




    Matters of the heart.

    Left in the dark.








    Submitted on 2015-08-10 00:38:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      When we write words, the words betray us and leave us in the dark; on the other hand when words write us, they dance, overflow, and illuminate the whole room.
    | Posted on 2015-08-28 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]
      strangely i agree.
    emotions
    electronic-motions
    captivated tide
    sonic drum of life
    tidal waves
    anything
    everything
    all at once
    all a hunch
    for hunger
    forming starvation
    connecting
    the miracle
    deconstructing
    the human bond
    to strengthen
    the human ties
    in and out
    inner
    outer
    circle
    square
    equations
    in conclusive
    even the quantum computer not fast enough
    to describe, to fully compute
    emotion.

    sometimes yes.
    sometimes brought to the light.
    but never fully exposed.
    i suppose that otherwise, we'd stop looking.
    so maybe that's the greater function.
    | Posted on 2015-08-10 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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