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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 52/166/172
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Alone


    Over and over I say
    You sit back and wait
    For the tides to change
    These emotions flooding in and out of my heart.

    Alone

    Everyday a new day yet these
    Feelings keep rearing its head
    Ever changing and yet silently still.

    Sleep my only escape.
    Dreams take me to the people I miss
    People I wait for until eternity
    Loves I have yet to meet
    Soul flames that will unite once more.

    I wake up Alone.






    Submitted on 2015-08-10 01:59:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      How is your Husband? How are you? How is Life?
    | Posted on 2015-09-16 00:00:00 | by Ra | [ Reply to This ]
      sorrow. alone.
    that is that trail
    that is the trial
    ...
    maybe
    ....
    still meaning maybe
    .....
    waiting for that confirmation
    ......
    waiting for that physical touch.

    biting my tongue
    sort of tired from biding my time.

    Alone.
    regardless.
    regardless of the interface.
    regardless of the modern adaptation
    of some ancient telephone
    it seems that longing
    aloneness
    these sorts of things
    they can't be rewired
    they can't be solved
    with anything but a you
    next to a me
    making an us
    sort of hurt
    by these silly little stipulations
    but regardless being patient.
    knowing that resolve,
    comes in time.
    | Posted on 2015-08-10 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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