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    dots Submission Name: Giving Updots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGiving Updots
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    No words to say to explain how I feel
    All feelings felt are just way too real
    In the dead of night when I'm wide awake
    Tears start falling and my body shakes
    Every thought in my mind is turning a gear
    Another added with the next thing I hear
    I cannot escape the chaos within
    The anger, fear and darkness win
    So I give up and lie down in the dirt
    Not giving a shit if again, I get hurt




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