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    dots Submission Name: The Cycledots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Cycledots
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    Inside yourself
    A barrier
    Around yourself
    More barriers
    You are just
    A carrier
    A message to bring
    No tune to sing
    But in a box
    A dark black box
    The wishing well
    Is hard to tell
    With bright red eyes
    And dirty lies
    The shadow man
    Is scary and
    He grabs you
    And hurts you
    Spilling his seed
    Making you bleed
    Gathers his crops
    And he never stops




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      Sounds very nasty and hopeless. There is no hope and nothing but unspeakable nastiness. And being unspeakable, it is nasty.

    I feel hopeless reading your poem and with no end to the nastiness.
    | Posted on 2015-08-29 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm this is kind of scary. Sounds like fear. I hope if this is a personal cycle of your own that you get past it. I think inevitably cycles can be broken. Moved from. Learned enough to change. I guess to me this represents personal doubt. Insecurity. Something i'm getting past, but something I've still got to work on a good bit of the time.
    | Posted on 2015-08-10 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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